Hi! I am a year 8 student at Havelock North Intermediate. I am in Room 16 and my teacher is Miss Robertson.
Friday, 26 February 2016
Quick Write
This week, we were doing a quick writing task. We had a maximim of 10 minutes to complete this. In it we had to include 5 words that were the complete opposite of what was happening in the picture. The words were, fun, run, billings, unicorn and santa. The focus in this was getting ideas down, the picture was about explosions. Here is the photo and my piece of writing.
“Santa Unicorns! That’s all I ever want” yelled Mr Billings “well actually I wish I had hair” he pulled a face, I can’t wait to do the fun run thought Mr Billings; it will be sooo FUN! That night the fun run took place near a construction site about to be finished, “I know I will bring my favourite car because it will be fun! Thought Mr Billings. That night Santa arrived at the showdown of the fun race to give presents to the kids at the fun race, “Aww I want a present” Yelled Mr Billings so loud everyone heard him, even Santa. Mr Billings started to cry very loudly he got Cary (HIS CAR) and started the engine, this fun run is a DUMB RUN!!!! Yelled Mr Billings with fury as he rammed Cary into the fun run, explosive TNT and explosions were everywhere lying down blowing up every second, fortunately Mr Billings did not survive, neither did Cary.
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